Wednesday 30 March 2016

Devices Are Taking Over Our Lives…

My Argument
https://docs.google.com/document/d/133zJ9PXOBR5Ww0xWvhWAj_X5usAED7sp3sxeCsmiJbM/editFor writing we have been learning to write an argument using the writing process. The topic was “Are Devices Taking Over Our Lives”.

Something I did really well in my writing was being able to explain my point of view.

Here is a section of my writing that shows this.

Firstly, Technology is affecting parents interacting with their children. Has this ever happened to you...You are at a restaurant and you ask you mum for something and all she says is “yeah” and it's not that kind of “oh yes sure” kind of thing it's just a very weak “yeah” and you know for sure that their not listening. Then you ask again and they don’t respond.

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